Magazine Article Draft 1

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Here are the first two drafts of our magazine article. As you can see at the top we had a completely different format, thing became problematic as:

- It was not a magazine article: it looked more like a poster and did not have a magazine look
- There is no distinctive columns: it is not adapted in comparison to a normal magazine article
- It has more of the vanilla brand image, than a magazine brand image; like billboard.

Due to these factors some serious changes needed to be made to the layout of our article. Once we had changed these parts we realised some of the content wasn't quite perfect and therefore we also had to change the writing in the article and then we would